M. W. Castelao writes
I loved the first story, and hope to see more from this author. I liked the writing style and the quick pace.
At first I was confused as to why the first story is presented out of order. However, once I got the hang of it I could see the reason in that it only added to the plot. I liked how it was written and it moves along. I also loved the other two stories, but the first one is really the winner.