A cup of this
A dash of that
Stir gently in the brainpan
A single grain of truth
Finely ground
Added to the mix
A signature dish
The best critic says
It is only half-baked
Loves the presentation
Had such promise
But the ending
Leaves a bad taste
The meal is ultimately
Unsatisfying
The question before the cook
Give someone else a sample
Or rework the recipe
I liked this. The ending was fun.
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